Kamikochi

May 1, 2017 07:32
Today I will go to Kamikochi with my friends.

Kamikochi is one of largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.

It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, then sediments deposited there.

The winter in Kamikochi is very cold -- the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.

On the other hand, the average temperature in summer is around 20 ℃, so you can go sightseeing comfortably.

However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.

Since Kamikochi is very beautiful, when you come to Nagano prefecture, please visit it.
上高地

今日は友人と上高地に行く予定です。

上高地は、標高1500m程の位置する、日本最大級の堆積平野です。

かつて、川が噴火活動によってがせき止められ池となり、そこに土砂が堆積してできたものと考えられています。

冬は非常に寒さが厳しく、1月の平均気温は-7.7℃、最低気温は-30℃以下になります。

一方夏は平均気温が20℃ほどとなり、とても涼しく気持ちよく観光できます。

ただし、一部地域は最暖月の平均気温が10℃を超えず、ツンドラ気候となっています。

もし長野県に来る機会があれば、是非訪れてみて下さい。
No. 1 Ellie's correction
  • Kamikochi is one of largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.
  • Kamikochi is one of the largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.
  • It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, then sediments deposited there.
  • It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities created a pond, then sediments deposited there.
  • The winter in Kamikochi is very cold -- the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.
  • The winter in Kamikochi is very cold the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.
  • However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.
  • However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, becuase it is a tundra climate.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Oceansea's correction
  • Today I will go to Kamikochi with my friends.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Kamikochi is one of largest depositional plains in Japan, the altitude of which is around 1500 meters.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, then sediments deposited there.
  • It is thought that a river dammed by eruption activities and made a pond, and then deposited sediments there.
     Your sentence is good.

    Another idea is to write it like this:

    "It is thought that eruption activities dammed up a river, forming a pond, causing sediments to be deposited there."
  • The winter in Kamikochi is very cold -- the average temperature in January is -7.7 ℃, and the lowest temperature is below -30 ℃.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • On the other hand, the average temperature in summer is around 20 ℃, so you can go sightseeing comfortably.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.
  • However, note that the average temperature of some areas don't doesn't exceed 10 ℃, that is a tundra climate.
I didn't even know what a depositional plain was. I had to look it up! Good word!

Kamikochi sounds beautiful! Now I want to go see it! =)
Toru
Thank you very much for the corrections!
Yes, since it's beautiful, you should go there if you have a chance :)
...Unfortunately, we changed our plan to go Kamikochi because it rained yesterday.
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